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Magneton

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Yet another one for my pokemon meme project :3
This took about.. didn't really take the time, but i recon 3 h.
As always this was colored with the wacom bamboo and i used my qpad 5k for the lineart.
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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Let's just go ahead and start with all the things you could improve first. The lineart itself is very clean, but there are some circles in there that are not very...circular. The screws just look like they are glued to it, not stuck inside like they should be. I think. I'm sorry if that is wrong, I don't know much about pokemon <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/> The shading is not very good, as it looks like you just used the burn tool. The little yellow squiggles don't look like electricity at all. they should have glow. They should have light, flowing strokes. They should not be completely yellow. The lineart would look better if it had been colored, and the background is quite boring. The eyes should also have shading and highlights in them. I'm sorry if I sound rude, but I want to help you become a better artist <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>