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Submitted: February 5, 2012
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Magnetonby =theunderminor

Cartoons & Comics / Digital Media / Cartoons / Drawings

Yet another one for my pokemon meme project :3
This took about.. didn't really take the time, but i recon 3 h.
As always this was colored with the wacom bamboo and i used my qpad 5k for the lineart.

Critique by *xXEclipseTheCatXx Mar 29, 2013, 9:42:42 PM

Let's just go ahead and start with all the things you could improve first. The lineart itself is very clean, but there are some circles in there that are not very...circular. The screws just look like they are glued to it, not stuck inside like they should be. I think. I'm sorry if that is wrong, I don't know much about pokemon

The shading is not very good, as it looks like you just used the burn tool. The little yellow squiggles don't look like electricity at all. they should have glow. They should have light, flowing strokes. They should not be completely yellow. The lineart would look better if it had been colored, and the background is quite boring. The eyes should also have shading and highlights in them. I'm sorry if I sound rude, but I want to help you become a better artist

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Critique by ~NovaArt109 Apr 19, 2012, 8:27:40 PM

I would like to start of by saying great job on creating a very unique and creative drawing..... that is good a bright mind will never hurt a picture...lol

So what do i have to say about this pic??
Well i got three things
1. The drawing ~ the overall pic looks very cool and just awesome....
2. The Color Selection ~ all the colors just seem natural in this pic and they just seem to flow smoothly with each other, which is really good
3. The Shading ~ I really love the shading in this one, looks very good....

So overall 2 thumbs up from me......